Monday, March 10, 2014

Last minute homework

We need an article to send to Snowfed on our tramp. Try a draft copy at home and remember quality not quantity. Here is a starter you may want to use.

  • Last Thursday Lyndhurst and Alford forest went on a tramp down Pudding hill stream. My favourite part was...
Hints
  • Remember to use eyes, ears and feelings. To help paint a picture in your readers mind use actions and details.
  • Try describing another area of the tramp.

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11 comments:

  1. James robinsonMarch 10, 2014 at 7:55 PM

    I loved the tramp. it was great fun. i should take my family. mum would be a bit freaked out but the rest of it would probably be ok!! Hope we get to go on another one soon

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  2. AnonymousMarch 10, 2014 at 9:27 PM

    Wow! looks like you all had an amazing tramp brilliant photos. W.A.Ms Mum

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  3. AnonymousMarch 10, 2014 at 9:59 PM

    Wow was it amazing I loved it I can't what to go on other trip:-)
    Mmh

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  4. UnknownMarch 11, 2014 at 12:31 AM

    Can that trip get any better it was so amazing

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  5. UnknownMarch 11, 2014 at 1:04 AM

    It sure was a great trip. great to see some comments guys.

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    1. AnonymousMarch 12, 2014 at 10:58 PM

      mr cook can you send my studdyladder to at carlojones@gmail.com C.J

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  6. AnonymousMarch 11, 2014 at 12:53 PM

    I like the trip it was fun when we cross the river

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  7. AnonymousMarch 11, 2014 at 12:56 PM

    Hey Mr Cooke,
    I have finished my writing it is about the river crossings.
    S.A.M

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  8. AnonymousMarch 12, 2014 at 11:05 PM

    I realy had fun crossing the frezzing water p.s 1000% fun :-) J.S

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  9. AnonymousMarch 13, 2014 at 12:58 PM

    I enjoyed doing the writing for the snowfed because I like writing.CR

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  10. BKMarch 13, 2014 at 7:17 PM

    hi mr cook how do you do it

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